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Friday, April 29, 2011

Period 5, Group A, Post 4 (Final)

Dear Editor of The Forest Acorn,

Subject: Raising Mass Awareness about the Damaging Effects of Acid Rain

Through your esteemed newspaper, I am honored to speak on behalf of the inhabitants of The Forest about the growing threat of acid rain.

Following frequent rainstorms, residents of The Forest have noticed a decrease in the food supply. Alarmed by my dwindling amount of berries, I quickly brought together a group of intellectuals to determine the cause. Those that joined me in this assembly of scientific minds included Orville the Owl, Socrates the Squirrel, and Tina the Trout.

We have attributed this dramatic change in our ecosystem to acid rain. Acid rain is becoming a major issue in our forest, and something needs to be done about it.

The activities of our human "superiors" are the major causes of acid rain. They pollute the air with car and power plant emissions, causing large amounts of sulfur dioxide, sulfur trioxide, and carbon dioxide to accumulate in the atmosphere. Another major contributor of pollution is farms. Their use of fertilizer and their disposal of our friends'—the pigs’—fecal matter cause an excess of nitrogen dioxide to gather in the atmosphere. These gases combine with water droplets in clouds to form acid rain.

Once acid rain falls, it chemically reacts with nutrients and minerals in the ground, like calcium and magnesium. The compounds containing these elements neutralize the acid rain, but are consequently leached from the soil. As a result, we lose that natural buffer against the rain’s acidity, leaving plants and microbes vulnerable. Furthermore, these nutrients are essential for the growth of organisms; without them, life dependent upon the soil for sustenance withers and dies. This is why many inhabitants of The Forest have noticed a dramatic decrease in foliage to feed upon.

Acid rain also runs off into lakes, rivers, and streams. It poses a direct threat to organisms within those bodies of water; low pH levels, for instance, can even directly kill fish, insects, and plants. In areas with already low biodiversity, this can be devastating. Tina the Trout has been telling us of the problems it has been giving her fellow water breathers; acidity in the water has been making it so that their eggs do not hatch, preventing their children from ever being born. Because of all the fish being gone, most of the land roamers that feed on fish are now dying of hunger and can no longer feed their young.

Whatever happens to us will also affect our human "overlords." If acid rain kills off a large number of us forest folk, human populations could tumble into even greater food crises. Moreover, while acid rain is not concentrated enough to directly harm humans, the gas particles that cause it can lead to lung problems. Acid rain can also hurt human economies. The loss of fish could be the death knell of fishing industries; the impairment of tree growth could cripple logging industries; and acid rain could slowly break down buildings, statues, and other structures. All of these things, combined with the destructive effect acid rain has on crops, will dissolve the world in an acidic solution. Governments will crumble into anarchy. Economies will crash, making food the sole currency. Mafias will emerge. What remains of the animal kingdom will be hunted to extinction.

To prevent this dark future, I suggest a series of campaigns aimed at raising both human and animal awareness. The outspoken local activist, Peggy the Pigeon, has suggested a massive movement: "Defecation Day." On D-Day the pigeons of the world will unite against a common enemy: the automobile. Why defecate on statues that will be dissolved by acid rain anyway? Preserve your ammo. Peggy has taken the first leadership role in this campaign against acid rain, and I implore you, the animal kingdom, to make similar efforts. We must act NOW to prevent this bleak future!

Sincerely,


Bernard the Bear

27 comments:

  1. Final Comments I gave Jesse prior to this post on the blog:
    Jesse, this looks fantastic! It has come a long way from the first post. I think you did a great job of expanding the effects acid rain has on humans. I also like how you added more descriptive information about the effects acid rain has on plants and bodies of water.
    The only criticism I have is that I think we should keep "the" in "The Forest" capitalized since it's the name of the forest. I also suggest that we remove the word "bowel" in the last paragraph as I think "movement" makes our comic intent quite clear, anyway.

    Superb job everyone!

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  2. This made me laugh. I really enjoyed it but I feel like a few exclamation points should be added in the second to last paragraph for emphasis.

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  3. This was an interesting point of view to write from. I especially enjoyed the small bits of humor you were able to incorporate by writing from the perspective of a bear. It made it very enjoyable to read. The last paragraph was my favorite part. Whoever came up with that is really creative. Good job.

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  4. I found this story very humurous! I also agree with Jackin about whose point of view you guys wrote from. It was very creative. I think you hit all the main points, so Great Job!

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  5. Cool beans. Your group did a fantastic job of mixing the real life concerns related to the effects of acid rain with a touch a humor. I felt for the inhabitants of the forests and wanted to do anything I could to understand what they were experiencing. I felt the article was extra original and it made me concerned for the wildlife and bodies of water that are affected by the acid in rain. Your information was presented thoroughly and accurately. Nice writing skills, yo!

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  6. This is boss. All of the animals I find especially entertaining. The main points of the causes and effects of acid rain. Also, Bernard the Bear seems to be fairly knowledgeable on ecology.

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  7. This is kinda funny in a cute, furry animal way. I love how your group personified the critters of the forest to raise acid rain awareness. The names of the creatures are all very interesting. Acid rain is also explained clearly.

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  8. Nice use of alliteration and imagery: "will dissolve the world in an acidic solution" The topic is well covered, the writing amusing. What was this letter to the editor responding to?

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  9. I really like this. It has a nice touch of humor and the point of view coming from Bernard the Bear is a good one. The author seems to know quite a bit about acid rain and its effects. Overall a good passage.

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  10. I liked how you guys blended the rather serious topic of acid rain with some elements of humor. I was almost laughing at the "Defecation Day" part! I'm glad that this passage isn't just another morose "This is humanity's fault, and we're gonna pay the price" type of paper. It lightens up the mood, but still retains the message about acid rain.

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  11. It is definatly humorous! But I wasnt immidatly interseted. It would have been nice to have a strong begging to grap the attention of the readers. But overall it stated the point very nicely!

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  12. This was pretty funny. I liked how you guys stated that not only are car and factories polluting, but so are farms. I think alot of people forget that.

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  13. Although this paper is science-related, the fact that you comrades included talking animals reminds me of Animal Farm.

    The explanation of acid rain/ecosystem acidification is rock-solid. I honestly don't have any constructive criticism for the actual informational part of this. The way your group presented the information was concise, entertaining, accurate, and overall enjoyable to read.

    Good use of hyperbole at the end of the second-to-last paragraph. The light-hearted and occasionally sarcastic parts of the letter brought a smile to my face.

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  14. nice job. it kept me very entertained and had my interest the whole time. The science of it was very well explained and you did a good job of making the animals seem as intelligent as humans.

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  15. I enjoyed this post. You guy's took on an interesting viewpoint and gave us a lot of good facts on what acid rain is and how it affects you the "animals." I also enjoyed how the names of the animals were alliterations to their species. Good job with the letter, also might I add, if animals could voice their opinions on what we as humans are doing, do you think that they would agree with our decisions?

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  16. Good job on making a funny letter while still keeping informative. Once again, I learned a lot while staying entertained. Socrates the Squirrel is one of the coolest names ever. I like how human superiors was said somewhat sarcastically, to emphasize that although we are the smartest species on earth, we still make simple mistakes that put whole ecosystems in danger.

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  17. Well this was very amusing! What a great overall idea for the setting and substance of this letter. Using this acceptable faulty conceptual method with these animals allows us all as readers to relate better in our minds the affect acid rain actually creates for the animals and their environment. Ideas, such as this, allows you to incorporate tons of information as you all did a spectacular job of doing. Even if the story is unrealistic and ultimately led to a description of animals (birds) vs. automobiles! Although it gave no real proposition of potential solutions, besides birds defecating,this was very well written and contains alot of useful information! Great work!

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  18. Great letter, and an interesting twist on the perspective from which we view acid rain. I really like the role part of this R.A.F.T, it reminds a bit of "Animal Farm." As far as explaining acid rain goes, this piece does an excellent job of using chemistry to describe its more practical effects.

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  19. Very interesting letter. I liked the point of view because animals, most of the time, receive the consequences for man kind's actions. Great facts and very funny.

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  20. Great letter! I really enjoyed the alliteration with the names; I thought it gave the letter a lighter feeling. You did a great job of using chemisty to describe the effects of acid rain. Nice work!

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  21. Hilarious Post. I especially liked it how you named the squirrel Socrates. A really unique perspective. You presented all your information effectively. I can't think of a single critisism. Well done!!!

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  22. I like the non serious attitude this letter portrays, and the word choice was spot-on. I liked the light tone, and the alliteration and vivid metaphors added variety. Over all, you guys did a Bear-y good job.

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  23. The joy this piece brings me is incontrovertible. This is proof that writing does not have to be factual and boring. In this case, it was a never ending stream of hilarity. The diction was perfect. The semantics of this article is treated with gusto and has an drastic effect on the whole of the writing. Kudos and great job!

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  24. Wow! What a creative premise. It was original and very funny. I loved that the name of their "town" was The Forest. This group did an awesome job of keeping the piece entertaining while still presenting the facts.

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  25. I absolutely loved this. The animals and the names were very creative and cute. It made this essay a lot more fun and not so depressing but still got the point across that this is hurting our planet.
    Great job

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  26. This post made me chuckle. I greatly enjoyed the perspective of the animals, and the last part about "Defecation Day" was pretty hilarious. Very good information mixed in with good humor. Great job

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  27. Nice guys it made me laught alittle *good way* very good info mized with humor nicely done

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