Dear Mr. President,
I am writing this letter to you today on behalf of my forest, my fellow Sasquatches, and most importantly, myself.Acid rain is becoming a major issue in my neck of the woods. It's killing the trees, it's killing the fish - it's killing almost everything! In my opinion, the killing of trees is the worst part. How am I supposed to hide from all these tourists that come here every single day if there aren't any trees? I can't just keep scaring people off all the time. It's bad enough that some people already know I exist; we don't need the whole world knowing it, too.
I think you know what the main cause of acid rain is, because I know you are a very smart man. But just in case you don't know, I will tell you. Acid rain is caused by emissions of acid anhydrides such as nitrogen oxides and sulfur oxides given off by the burning of fossil fuels such as coal and oil. These substances pollute our atmosphere. Then, when it rains, these anhydrides react with the rain water to produce an acidic solution.
When acid rain is created, it does some serious damage. It raises the acidity of lakes, causing many types of plankton and other small organisms to die. These tiny organisms aren't the only ones affected by acid rain - all aquatic life, including the fish, can die out! Acid rain leaches aluminum from the soil which seeps into bodies of water and can poison the aquatic life. If the fish die what are my friends, the eagles and bears, going to eat? The answer is nothing. Sure, bears can eat other things like berries, but guess what? Acid rain kills plants and trees too! This is caused by the depletion of calcium in the soil that the plants and trees really need to survive. If these plants and trees are gone, the food chains will be corrupted and cause my whole ecosystem to be destroyed. So, what am I supposed to eat when the largest organisms begin to die out? I'll tell you what! I could start eating people! And I know, Mr. President, that you do not want me to start eating people.
It isn’t only the forest that is damaged by acid rain but the human world is as well. Acid rain can erode buildings and cause permanent damage to monuments. Repairing these damages would cost money that could be spent more efficiently. Acid rain can also have an effect on human health. When sulfur and nitrogen oxides are released into the air, they react with the atmospheric gases which people inhale. These new compounds can damage people’s lungs, especially humans suffering from asthma.
There are many simple precautions your race can take to prevent acid rain from damaging my wonderful forests. For starters, I think you can pass more laws to restrict the emissions of gases such as NO2 and SO3. I know your government passed the Clean Air Act a while ago, and it has helped. However, over the past few years the damages of acid rain have really increased. I think it is time for you to step in and say, "Hey! I believe that we need to extend our efforts to minimize acid rain as much as possible!" And then follow through with it! Because let me tell you something right now, Mr. President. If you don’t take any action to put an end to acid rain, then you will probably be the first to be eaten. And trust me; I know how to get past all of your fancy security.
Sincerely,
King Sasquatch
Great job Kenzie!
ReplyDeleteOverall this really covers just about everything there is on acid rain. It has really improved since my first draft. There are only a few grammatical and mechanical errors that I can find in this draft. Otherwise, it is spot on!
I really liked this! It's a creative and fun way of describing the plights of nature concerning acid rain. I think it's brilliant that you used a letter from a fictional creature to the president in order to express the effects of acid rain. Even the mythical creatures are being affected by the very real and eminent problem that is acid rain. My only very nit-picky comment is that there isn't a space between the first and second sentence. Other than that, fantastic job!
ReplyDeleteI really liked the point of view you took on in this letter. You showed the importance of acid rain by writing to the President, yet you kept it entertaining by writing from an animal. I especially liked the humor you managed to insert while referring to the fact that you are a sasquatch. The ending was very creative. Great job.
ReplyDeleteI love the point of view you guys chose! I like this letter because it talks about all the harmful effects of acid rain and you guys mixed in some humor with it so Good Job!
ReplyDeleteYou guys owned this letter. Actually, I guess it was Sasquatch. Speaking of Sasquatch, I really enjoyed the point of view you guys decided on, along with to whom the letter is being sent. You've mentioned the causes of acid rain, and how it can affect the environment. Nice work!
ReplyDeleteHaha yes! Sasquatches! It was very enjoyable and very well done except for a few small details like the space between the first two sentences and perhaps a few grammatical errors every now and then.
ReplyDeleteGreat job guys. Liked how the point of view came from Sasquatch who lives in the forest. Really describes all the facts about how acid rain hurts the forest which is probably the most important point of our research.
ReplyDelete"And trust me; I know how to get past all your fancy security." This is great. The topic is well covered and the perspective is amazing.
ReplyDeleteThis is a really good post. I like the prose a lot; it's simple without being repetitious. I also like how you guys juxtaposed the information with a humorous perspective -- reading about how acid rain erodes buildings for the umpteenth time was made enjoyable by imagining a Sasquatch breaking into the White House commando-style and sparring with the president. Good job!
ReplyDeleteI agree with the other comments! I also really like how you mentioned the effects of acid rain not only on the plants and animals but also humans by bringing in the asthma fact. And you also brough in how to fix these promblems like passing more laws. Well done!
ReplyDeleteI like the perspective you've chosen for this letter. It highlights important factors involved with acid rain and, although the writer is a little far-fetched, shows some realistic problems.
ReplyDeleteI really liked this letter. I think it would be better though if there was more about the sasquatch in the middle of it.
ReplyDeleteI didn't know sasquatches knew so much chemistry and biology. Well written. Informational but also entertaining. Good job.
ReplyDeleteI like that you felt the need to direct it at a high power. These problems are obviously and issue so the directness is nice! Great job!
ReplyDeleteGreat job! This has much substance to it and explains in detail the formation of acid rain, the many problems it has and is causing, and finally proposing some potential solutions to these problems! All while incorporating humor into the concepts of the overall story. Great work!
ReplyDeleteVery interesting point of view. I liked that it was addressed to the president from an animal, which would probably be most affected by the acid rain. I was entertained the whole time. Great job!
ReplyDeleteAmazing post. I really enjoyeed reading it. My only critisism would be to add more about how without calcium and magnesium acid rain releases aluminum from the minerals in the soil which is what poisons the plants.
ReplyDeleteA wonderful point of view. It was very creative and funny while still being factual and getting the point across. My favorite parts were the threats of eating people.
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